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Fiction Writing

By November 8, 2021February 18th, 2023Book reviews

Fiction Writing

A review of two books about the craft of fiction writing

Fiction writing, spinning enticing prose around a gripping story, has a great many elements to consider before you have a good novel or short story collection. The two books below will help you familiarize yourself with all the essential drivers necessary in fiction writing. From the “holy trinity of story” to “the [psychic distance] between the narrative and the mind, heart, and body of the POV character”, you’ll study concepts that will elevate your understanding of fiction writing.

As its title suggests, Immediate Fiction is a quick and easy introduction to writing fiction. This is essentially a writing 101 course in a book. Sometimes simple is best, especially when you’re approaching fiction for the first time, or when you’ve gotten so lost in the maze of fiction that you need to return to the start. This book will help.

 

Immediate FictionTitle: Immediate Fiction

Author: Jerry Cleaver

Published by: St. Martin's Griffin

Release Date: Dec 2004

Buy the Book: Amazon | Indiebound

"From the legendary creator of the Writer's Loft in Chicago, comes a writing course for those who want to see results now. Immediate Fiction covers the entire process of writing including manuscript preparation, time management, finding an idea, getting words on the page, staying unblocked, and submitting to agents and publishers.

With insightful tips and advice, Jerry Cleaver helps writers manage doubts, fears, blocks, and panic all while helping to develop their writing in minutes a day. A practical and accessible resource, this book has everything the aspiring writer needs to write and sell novels, short stories, screenplays, and stage plays."

- Goodreads

 

Chapter title: Want, Obstacle, Action

Jerry Cleaver describes the "holy trinity of story" in three dramatic elements: want, obstacle, and action.

Whether you're just stepping into the world of fiction and need an introduction or you've been entangled in fiction writing and need a reboot, Immediate Fiction will help set you straight. While simple in nature, the fiction fundamentals that Jerry Cleaver teaches are essential to writing a good story, and solidifying your grasp of them will make your writing stronger. He not only focuses on helping you create a compelling plot through writing exercises, but he also walks you through the other aspects of being a writer such as scheduling your writing time and getting ready to publish. This is a great all-encompassing book to ease you into fiction writing, or for the veterans, to remind you of the helpful basics.

John Gardner offers useful advice in The Art of Fiction, a craft book for those who want to learn the nuts and bolts of the craft and add more depth to their writing. It contains valuable lessons about the mechanisms of fiction writing, from more abstract ideas such as artistic mystery to actionable red flags like overloaded sentences or inconsistent diction.

 

The Art of Fiction - Notes on Craft for Young WritersTitle: The Art of Fiction: Notes on Craft for Young Writers

Author: John Gardner

Published by: Vintage

Release Date: Jun 1991

Buy the Book: Amazon | Indiebound | Barnes & Noble

"This classic guide, from the renowned novelist and professor, has helped transform generations of aspiring writers into masterful writers—and will continue to do so for many years to come.

John Gardner was almost as famous as a teacher of creative writing as he was for his own works. In this practical, instructive handbook, based on the courses and seminars that he gave, he explains, simply and cogently, the principles and techniques of good writing. Gardner’s lessons, exemplified with detailed excerpts from classic works of literature, sweep across a complete range of topics—from the nature of aesthetics to the shape of a refined sentence. Written with passion, precision, and a deep respect for the art of writing, Gardner’s book serves by turns as a critic, mentor, and friend. Anyone who has ever thought of taking the step from reader to writer should begin here."

-Goodreads

 

Image of "Poetic Rhythm" segment where metrical analysis markings are noted over every word.

John Gardner breaks down poetic rhythm in writing.

While The Art of Fiction labels itself as a craft book for young writers, writers of any age can benefit from its notes. "Young" seems to instead equate to "eager to learn", with this book's tone being reminiscent of a class in higher education, as it speaks to readers in an academic manner. John Gardner discusses the overarching impressions of fiction, such as aesthetic and artistic impressions, and goes on to teach about common errors, writing techniques, and plotting.

First published in 1984, some of the language Gardner uses in this book is a bit outdated, and additionally his tone and references to other material come off as condescending. If you're able to separate this from the actual advice he gives, you'll be able to find solid, applicable technical advice. From tips about poetic rhythm to shifts in psychic distance, Gardner addresses the small details in fiction writing that can make or break your book.

These books will introduce you to writing fiction, helping you to gain a good understanding of what it takes to write good fiction and what techniques to keep in mind as you develop and refine your story.

We have additional blog posts for specific aspects of writing fiction to help you:

Add Structural Dimension to Your Story

Add Depth to Your Scenes

Write Artful Sentences

Best of luck as you start your foray into fiction. Once you have a finished novel or short story collection, don’t hesitate to reach out. We’d love to be alongside you on your book publicity and marketing journey.

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